Make Your Book Reader-Worthy

Thank goodness Shelly Thacker walks her own path, otherwise she might be a forest ranger instead of a national bestselling author giving us all sorts of fabulous books to read!

 Not sure what I’m talking about? Check out her bio!

As NaNoWriMo wraps up, I’m thrilled to have Shelly guest-blogging today with wonderful insight into the revision process and why it’s so crucial to the quality of your book … and your future sales! Check it out!


Timeless by Shelly Thacker

When I first jumped into the e-publishing world in early 2011, there was a “gold rush” mentality among authors. The ebook bubble would soon burst, everyone said, so you had to move fast if you wanted to get in on the bonanza. Forget about revising your book. You barely had enough time to get the file converted and click that Publish button. Upload now! Quick, before you miss out!

Today, writers have calmed down a bit. The digital bubble hasn’t burst. Kindle, Nook and tablet sales are breaking records worldwide. Ebooks are clearly here to stay. And so, as NaNoWriMo http://www.nanowrimo.org/ draws to a close for another year, I think this is a good moment to revisit a time-honored question: how much should you revise your book before you publish it?

My answer can be summed up in three words: Take Your Time. The temptation to just dash off a draft and click Publish can feel overwhelming—but it’s no way to launch a successful career.

You need to make your book reader-worthy. And that takes as long as it takes.

Today’s readers are smart, savvy consumers who aren’t shy about voicing their opinions. If they see weak dialogue, lame characterization, sloppy technique, or pointless plot twists they won’t just complain to you about it, they’ll complain to the whole book-buying world. You’ll wake up to find your book plastered with negative reviews. On Amazon. On Barnes & Noble. On Goodreads. On review blogs. Ebooks live forever—and so does bad word-of-mouth.

In this new digital world, authors still build careers the same way they always have: one book, one reader at a time. If you want to become a successful novelist, you need to start building a following right from day one. You need to publish novels that will get people talking, reviewing, blogging, Tweeting, Liking, sharing. Only your best work will take you there.

If you don’t give readers a book that’s worthy of their money, time and attention, someone else will.

So take your time. Revise, edit, then revise some more. Make sure your book will build your career, not kill your career. Your readers deserve the best you can possibly give them, so give them nothing but your best.

Authors, has the digital revolution changed the way you approach revisions?


Shelly Thacker photoThanks again to Shelly for stopping by!

 Shelly’s paranormal and historical romances have won numerous national awards and lavish praise from Publishers Weekly, The Atlanta Journal-Constitution, The Detroit Free Press, and The Oakland Press, who have called her books “innovative,” “addictive,” “erotic” and “powerful.” Her latest release, Timeless, about a stolen bride swept away to a mysterious island paradise, is currently on the Nook paranormal romance and Kindle historical fantasy bestseller lists.

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Website: www.shellythacker.com
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The “Supreme” Key to Creating Characters

This post continues where Monday’s post (From Supreme Ruler of the Universe to Girl Next Door: How to Write Believable Characters) left off.

You, as the supreme ruler of your story, have given your character a goal. Excellent. And your goal as a writer is to create a well-paced story that has compelling characters and organic plot progression. Believe it or not, all that stems from what your characters want (their goal) and how much they want it (how motivated they are).

At the beginning of your story, something is going to happen that creates either a desire or a necessity for change (trying to win the girl, for example, would be a desire; being thrust into a room full of terrorists and trying to survive is a desire, sure, but it stems from necessity). That’s the moment when the story truly gets going, and it’s often called the Inciting Incident. If a character’s desire is so strong as to either create the inciting incident or move them through it, then the character’s desire is creating action. That’s motivation, and it’s the engine of your story.

Motivation does not have to be complex, but it does have to be compelling. Look at Bruce Willis in Die Hard. He wants to save his wife. That straight-forward desire creates forward momentum for an entire movie, and leads to lots of sub-goals that go into bringing that desire to fruition.

Similarly, Scarlett O’Hara is motivated to have money so that she never has to suffer from being poor again. That desire drives the entire second half of the story. It’s a simple, universally understood desire, and yet it drives one of the most well-known characters of our time.

So where does that motivation come from? Character background … and that translates to backstory.

With regard to Scarlet, for example, we see much of the backstory of her goal to acquire wealth. She practically starved after the war, and that’s strong motivation to have money to buy food, have nice things, be self-sufficient.

But what if your backstory doesn’t support your character’s goal? I’ve written and critiqued a lot of pages over the course of my career, and this is something that comes up quite often. That’s understandable; the creative process is fluid. But it’s that fluidity that’s key. I’ve worked with writers who dig in their heels, insisting that X and Y is what happened to little Johnny back when he was a child and that’s why he is the way he is. But X and Y don’t support the fact that little Johnny is now a determined loner who floats from town to town saving people from vampires. The backstory doesn’t fit the goal, and the character doesn’t fit into the box created by the author.

Worse, the author refuses to adjust the backstory because “that’s his story.”

But you’re the god of this story–you created the character. You created the backstory. If it doesn’t work, fix it!

In my very first book, I needed better motivation for what my hero was doing. He was essentially committing a crime (impersonating someone) and my editor rightly pointed out that he needed a stronger motivation. In draft one, he’s an only child. But upon revisions — who knew! — he suddenly acquired a brother, not to mention an entire life with that sibling. And guess what? That one seemingly small change altered everything and a story that didn’t work now flowed.

So fiddle with backstory, folks. You’ll be surprised just how “motivating” that can be.

I’ve been loosely doing Writing Wednesdays, but I’m going to do them with more regularity in the future. So next Wednesday, look for a post on the process of crafting backstory. When do you start working on it? How? What’s the word on character dossiers and interviews. Fun stuff!

Are you a writer? Have you ever ripped out a backstory and changed it entirely?

From Supreme Ruler of the Universe to Girl Next Door: How to Write Believable Characters

First things first: There is no right or wrong way to create a character. Where your book is concerned, you’re God.  So that’s my caveat. If you like what I have to say, great. Use it. If not, then just toss it. You’re the boss here. You’re in charge. (Feels nice, doesn’t it?)

All characters have to have a goal, and you as a writer have a goal too. That goal is to create memorable, larger than life characters that have a life of their own (and often, that life is even greater than their story!)

(If you’re not familiar with the concept of characters having goals, I highly recommend Deb Dixon’s excellent Goal, Motivation, Conflict. Unfortunately, it’s pretty expensive these days, but check your library or ask your writer friends if you’re looking for a copy. Robert McKee’s Story also does a great job dissecting the components that make up compelling characters. It’s a much denser read, however, so be prepared to really sink your teeth in!)

In other words, your character needs to be real. But not so real (not so detailed) that complexity turns into a muddle.

Characters are a simulation, and we parse out the bits that the reader needs to see in the writing of the story.

Okay, but then what do I mean by real and larger than life? Your goal when you’re writing your novel or screenplay or short story is to find a character that fascinates you. If you’re not wowed by your character, your readers sure as hell won’t be either.

Need some examples? Have you heard of Lord Stark? Or Stephanie Plum? Or Indiana Jones? Or Harry Potter? I’m guessing you can tell me more about the character than you can about the details of the various plots they move through.

That’s not to say plot isn’t important — it is! But plot and character are inextricably intertwined (that’s the former lawyer in me shining through). That’s all well and good, but if you’re just starting out with a blank piece of paper, which comes first? Character or plot?

Frankly, it depends on you. As it should. You’re God here, remember? The god of your world.

The Demon You Know - "Shows what would happen if Buffy grew up and kept her past a secret" - a demon hunting soccer mom short story!Maybe you mind have a character burning a hole in your head (I was that way with Kate from the Demon Hunting Soccer Mom series).

Or you might have a story idea you love (that was the Shadow Keepers for me — started with the idea of a paranormal judicial system and and the first case my heroine would prosecute. The world came first … the characters later.

Either way, you’re going to meld character and story to get the end result. But what result? Well, the traits and characteristics of the folks peopling your stories. And remember, characters are tied to context.

What do I mean by that? Well, Romeo and Juliet wouldn’t be who they are without the feud. And the details and idiosyncrasies that make Sherlock Holmes so fascinating wouldn’t be nearly as effective if he was a baker.

Hitchcock had a very workable approach in my opinion: First you decide what the characters are going to do, and then you provide them with enough characteristics to make it seem plausible that they would do that.

So. What are our characters going to do?

Well, they need to care about something (maybe they don’t realize it right off the bat, but they need to care…and it can change. Think of Han Solo in Star Wars. Caring about saving his own neck and getting money changes to caring about his friends and the rebellion).

And, of course, caring ties into a goal. The goal drives the story and it’s what makes the reader care.

If your heroine is a runner, is the reader going to be more engaged if she’s just running in her neighborhood or if she’s training for the Olympic trials?

Somehow the character gets thrust into action — if they don’t act, there’s no story. In my demon hunting soccer mom series, for example, Kate is happily living as a suburban soccer mom. But she’s thrust back into action (and back into the role of professional demon hunter) when a demon crashes through her kitchen window.

In Die Hard, Bruce Willis is thrust into action when terrorists take over the building.

In Star Wars, Luke is thrust into action when the Empire kills his aunt and uncle.

So, we’ve got forward motion in our story and we have a goal. How much the character wants to accomplish that goal is important. The more the character wants, the more interesting the character is. More drive equals more interest.

Fair enough, but what if your character just isn’t that driven? Hello? Have you not been reading? You’re the god of the story. Make him care. Rip out his backstory, destroy the life he thought he knew, replace it with one that gives him something that drives him forward.

Remember, your job is to create interesting people doing interesting things in a believable way. The key to that is “create.” Your characters aren’t real. They don’t exist independent of the situation you’ve put them in.

So if the character doesn’t care and you have no action, then you need to change something. How? Look at the character’s motivation. The “why” of what they’re doing.

And that, Dear Reader and Dear Writer, is something we’ll talk about on Wednesday in Part 2.

(And speaking of books and characters … I’ve got a new book out this month, WHEN PASSION LIES, a Shadow Keepers novel with some pretty intense characters. I’ve also got the re-release of a light paranormal romance, THE CAT’S FANCY, priced for a limited time at only $2.99. The books themselves are wildly different, but they have one thing in common: the characters know exactly what they want, and are determined to get it.)

Now it’s your turn to tell me — who are some of your favorite characters (either heroes or villains) from either books or from movies. I’m always looking to watch and/or read about really fascincating folks!

Short or long, stories pack powerful punches

Today, I’m blogging over at the Whine Sisters, and I posted a link to Porcelain Unicorn, a truly lovely short film. And I mean short. Just three minutes. Pop on over and check it out if you want to see a truly powerful punch packed into just three short minutes.

Compare that to something like Game of Thrones, which I’m currently reading. Or Schindler’s List if we want to stay both on theme and with film. Also gut-wrenching, with deep emotion and strong themes.

There’s a lesson there, you know, and it’s not just that creative folks can make movies to fit the parameters of contests. No, it’s that sometimes the story dictates the length. And if you let the story do that, you’re going to get more bang for your buck because the emotion can either be drawn and milked and developed, as in a longer story, or laid out with heart-wrenching power (or humor or pathos or horror) as in a shorter work.

I haven’t always been a fan of shorter stories–I preferred to meet characters and then stay with them. It’s one of the reasons I love books that are part of series. But I’ve done several shorts now, and I love them. From short short stories to novellas.

Right now, I have three shorter works available, and each of them are exactly the length that they should be (which, frankly, is an advantage of epublishing). The first is a novella, SHADOW KEEPERS: MIDNIGHT, which is the prequel to my upcoming release WHEN PASSION LIES (which got a great review in Publisher’s Weekly and was named Amazon’s best romance for May! Yay!).

When Passion Lies

Shadow Keepers, Book 4

I’ve also got a fun, edgy short story in Love Is Murder…very noir and very short. And, again, just the right length for the story.Love is Murder (ITW anthology) cover

The Demon You Know cover art

Just released in e-format!

And, of course I’ve already chattered on about The Demon You Know, my first foray into indie e-pubbing. (subliminal message…only 99 cents … buy, buy…it’s cheaper than a cuppa coffee….ahem…sorry. Back on track…)

All of which brings me to my ePub Tip of the Day: The cool thing about publishing ebooks is that you truly don’t have to worry about word count. Write the story as the story needs to be written. And doesn’t that just feel great?

Shane Black knows action

Okay, that’s a duh headline if ever there was one, but it’s true. And while I aspire to include just geegobs of original content on this blog, at the moment, I’m reading, revising and (yes! thank you!) fixing a story problem per an epiphany in an upcoming book.

Which translates to: Original content? Not so much. Fabulous stuff I find on the web? I’m all about the sharing.

So enjoy. This is an article that’s geared toward screenwriters, but every single point Black makes–and there are twelve of them–apply to novels as well. Folks, it’s all about the story.

Enjoy!


Crash, bang, wallop what a picture

Summer means action at the cinema, so here’s Shane Black, the master of the art, giving Sam Delaney a masterclass in thrills